Real Before & After Examples

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Most Common Fix

Professional Summary

Example role: Marketing Manager

The Problem

Vague, forgettable — says nothing specific about the person.

The Fix

Results-driven, specific numbers, clear value to the employer.

Before — Generic & Weak

Experienced marketing professional with a passion for driving results.

Skilled in various marketing channels and tools. Team player who works

well in fast-paced environments. Looking for a challenging role where

I can use my skills and grow professionally.

After — Sharp & Specific

Marketing Manager with 6 years driving B2B growth for SaaS companies.

Led campaigns that generated $4.2M in pipeline and grew organic traffic

by 180% in 12 months. Skilled in HubSpot, Salesforce, and paid media.

Known for turning underperforming channels into top revenue drivers.

Biggest Impact

Work Experience Bullets

Example role: Customer Service Rep

The Problem

Describes duties instead of achievements — every resume looks the same.

The Fix

Quantified results show real value and stand out to hiring managers.

Before — Duties, Not Results

• Responsible for answering customer phone calls and emails

• Helped customers resolve issues with their accounts

• Worked with other teams to solve problems

• Trained new employees on company software

After — Achievements That Pop

• Handled 80+ customer interactions/day with a 97% satisfaction score

• Reduced average resolution time by 34% by creating a shared FAQ doc

• Collaborated with billing & tech teams to resolve 300+ escalations/mo

• Onboarded and trained 12 new hires in under 3 months

ATS Killer Fix

Skills Section

Example role: Project Manager

The Problem

Missing the exact keywords that job-scanning software looks for.

The Fix

Tailored to real job descriptions so you pass the automated filter.

Before — Skipped by Software

Skills: Microsoft Office, Communication, Leadership,

Problem-Solving, Team Player, Time Management,

Multitasking, Organized, Detail-Oriented

After — Passes ATS & Impresses Humans

Project Management: Agile, Scrum, Waterfall, PMP-certified

Tools: Jira, Asana, MS Project, Smartsheet, Confluence

Skills: Stakeholder management, risk mitigation, sprint planning,

cross-functional coordination, budget tracking ($2M+ projects)

Often Overlooked

Career Gap Explanation

Example role: Returning Professional

The Problem

Unexplained gaps create doubt — hiring managers assume the worst.

The Fix

Frame the gap honestly and show continued growth during that time.

Before — Raises Red Flags

2021 – 2023: [gap not addressed]

The resume simply skips two years,

leaving the hiring manager to wonder

what happened and why.

After — Builds Trust

2021 – 2023: Career Break (Caregiving + Professional Development)

• Served as primary caregiver for a family member

• Completed PMP certification (2022) and Google Analytics cert

• Freelanced on 3 small projects to stay current in the field

What makes the difference?

Numbers over duties

We swap vague job descriptions for real achievements with specific numbers whenever possible.

ATS keywords

Most resumes are screened by software before a human ever sees them. We write for both.

Your voice, sharper

We don't make you sound like someone else — we make the best version of you jump off the page.

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